Monday, 2 December 2013

My SPM's essay - horror story

ASSALAMUALAIKUM :)

Hye suma..okay, ni aku ada type essay SPM aku . Adala draft sikit sebelum masuk dewan exam dan alhamdulillah soalan dia menepati essay aku . Sebagai selingan kat blog ni . Thank you to Aisha Suraya (tokoh nilam BI) for guide me to draft this essay . May Allah bless you .  Tapi sapa yang lemah semangat diasarankan supaya jangan membaca . Cewaahh :)) Okay the tittle is :

Experience of Being Alone 

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The clock was ticking , alarming me as it was already late into the night , 12.30 a.m . The bright flashes of lightning lit up the dark sky and was immediately followed by the deafening blasts and thunder . The scariest thing was , I was all alone at home as my parents had visited my grandparents in Penang . In fact, I am a cowardly girl but halfheartedly made the decision to stay at home and hit the books as SPM just around the corner . There was only two weeks left before the true war , the one that I feared the most will begin . Without any doubt, I called my best-friend, Farshalna and asked her to accompany me as I was not really brave enough to stay at home. Luckily, she wanted to . I was updating my blog aftre a whole day of studying very hard . "Mozilla Firefox is not responding" kept flashing on the screen . The connection failed and this made me feel worse .

I jumped  onto my bed in protest . All of a sudden , 'creak...' the door creaked . I was speechless. "Mom, are you home? Mom? Dad?" I walked slowly to their room . Yes, the door was opened but nothing was there . "Too much imagination . Shut it down Nyna". I dragged my feet heading to my room. "Nyna...help..I need you help..only you can help me, honey.." without glancing back I ran as fast as lightning and locked my room . My heart kept beating . I can feel the color drain from my face . "There was nothing, believe in yourself Nyna. There is no such thing as ghosts" TUPPP! My heart was racing terribly . The light blew out and it was a pitch-black night . I nearly jumped out of my skin . Thank God , my phone was with me ! At the moment my phone was my soul..I flashed my phone, I was really scared of dark . It was totally terrible when my phone, my only source of sanity fell to the floor, snuffed out . My screamed rivaled the blast of thunder outside . I was totally lost .

"God, please help me..I beg You..I promise to be nice after this" my blood froze like ice . I nearly cried like a child . I heard many sounds which I never had before . I was stoned and almost turn mad. There was a voice which begged me to help her . BULP..I held my breathe and thank God when the dark, cold night ended. I feel totally safe . Fuhh..my phone was under my bed. In a blink of an eye, I groped under my bed to retrieve my sanity, my phone . "ARGGHHH!!!" I stood rooted to the ground . A hand touched my skin . It was as cold as ice . I had no idea what it was but it really scared to death . It freaked me to dead . I grabbed my phone and ran out from the room, my bedroom the place where I trusted the most , but it was not at the moment .

'KRING..KRINGG' the bell was ringing endlessly . I was low in spirit . In reluctance I headed to the door , hoping that was my parents. I sneaked the visitor through window and shed happy tears as that was my best friend. I opened the door and something scared me until I lost all my words. Yes, it was my best friend but followed by a body or a spirit behind her sending shivers down my spine . A woman cloaked in blood, her face was pale as corpse . She has long rat snest hair which half covered her face . The smell was rotten, killing me. "Leave me alone !" I cried soundly . "Hey, what are you talking about ? Fine, I'll leave you alone. Silly girl..""No, it wasn't you..just something dying behind you.." I said it slowly. "Nyna, listen listen to me..That is nonsense ! There is no such thing as ghosts!" "I swear..I'm scared to death! Please believe me" the women disappear from my sight slowly, smiling to me showing her rotten tooth . "No..no..that's completely creepy ." "If you don't believe me then who else?" I sobbed. "Fine, let prove it . We will search high and low for the ridiculous thing!" she said firmly . Without any word , she held my hand tightly offering no chance of escape . We walked through all parts in my house . Suddenly, my nose sniffed, something I hate the most, rotten smell.

"Do you smell what I do?" she nodded . ZUPP..she lifted the map and.."Euuww, that is terrible!" blood covered the door to basement . In fact it was an alternative way to the basement . I starred in disbelief. "Whose blood is that?" "SHHH..." the blood was frozen . She tried to unlock the door "Hey, are you out of mind? It is late at night , I mean early in morning..Please don't. I think things will get worse. I beg you, don't do that" She called her friend and they arrived in half of an hour . Her friends opened the door slowly . We thudded into the basement . "Ergghhh, it is totally stinky" her friend babbled . Yes it was . My tears kept falling with no end . My world turned into pieces. It was my parents body with no soul . I was tragic . My parents was drenched in blood . "Mom was it you who begged for help?" I fell to the ground , my knees went weak. I had no strength . My mother's lullaby was playing in my head "baby..little baby..it's time to say goodbye..baby don't cry baby I will always by your side"

"Nyna, forensic confirmed that your parents were murdered in a robbery a month ago", the day when I was sitting for my trial exams . I was all alone in fact before . It just my parents soul who accompanied me before and I know they were suffering so much . The bodies were buried safely near my home . The incident kept bear in my mind showing no ways to get rid of . It was really hard to lose someone you love the most but it was . What can I do now keep praying for their happiness and hope their soul rest in peace . By the way , I keep wondering how do I live with them before after the trial exams ? I am keep wondering .

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Selesai sudah cerita . Okay, just cerita nah..doa-doalah semuanya dalam keadaan baik sahaja . Last but not least , hargailah ibubapa selama mereka masih ada . :3 nak letak gambaq hantu aku pun seram..muehehehe..:DD


32 comments:

  1. good essay! i enjoy reading yours!

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  2. Oh my god....Mystery + Tragic .. i love it.. Can I take some of your brilliant ideas from your essay ??

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  3. damn it was superb farah. Hats off man.

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  5. Nice n awesome

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  6. I love your essay , can I take it.

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  7. I love your essay , can I take it.

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  9. Wow really bad grammar and it didnt make any sense her parents died before or after her spm what is going on?

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  10. agree with ghost..mind your grammar girl...

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  11. my god 😄 your essay sooo good enough !! iloveit !!! can i copy it for my homework 😉?

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  12. i love your essay..can i copy it?

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  13. i love your essay..can i copy it?

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  14. nice essay

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  15. Oh God..mremang bulu roma cheiq😲.. so real.. iam really excited to read ur next brilliant idea elyna😉.. good job dear👍

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    1. haha thankyou you, belum sempat nak publish post baru. hectic sikit but insyaAllah :)

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    1. hahahaha thankyou atas pujian membina :)

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  17. why ur essay same like the other one? are you copy paste the international essay ? ENGLISH LITERATURE FOR SECONDARY SCHOOL ?

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  18. To be honest, the plot was alright but there were a bundle of mistakes for instance grammatical errors and there weren't many bombastic words used plus the story line was out of order and confusing, in conclusion, good job but it could've been better. :)

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